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  1. 13-06-2007, 10:17 #1
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    Default Fourth story and the first story rewrite ...

    I was out of the country (India) for a while and I got back a week ago. It's been pretty damn hot lately and it's one of reasons that I have almost zero productivity, but I did get one thing done. I finished my fourth short story!!! I also finished rewriting the first (very) short story. I'd greatly appreciate your input ...

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    Default Re: Fourth story and the first story rewrite ...

    yeah, the forth one actually sounds good.
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    Default Re: Fourth story and the first story rewrite ...

    Quote Originally Posted by Alpha View Post
    yeah, the forth one actually sounds good.
    Really? Do you see any improvement ...?
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    Default Re: Fourth story and the first story rewrite ...

    Yeah, just slightly.
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    Default Re: Fourth story and the first story rewrite ...

    Quote Originally Posted by Alpha View Post
    Yeah, just slightly.
    Ah ... *** sigh ***

    I guess when I write my hundredth story or so ..., I'll probably have something publishable ...
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    Don't worry, you'll get there.
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    Not everyone was born to write OE, but don't despair, there are other ways to make a fortune.
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    Quote Originally Posted by SFB View Post
    Not everyone was born to write OE, but don't despair, there are other ways to make a fortune.
    Geez, thanks. That's a great encouragement (or should I say discouragement ...) ...
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    Default Re: Fourth story and the first story rewrite ...

    Quote Originally Posted by online.education View Post
    Geez, thanks. That's a great encouragement (or should I say discouragement ...) ...
    I think that may have just been a statement not a critique, anyways don't be put off if you enjoy writing just carry on
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    Default Re: Fourth story and the first story rewrite ...

    Have you ever sent your stories off to any publishers Mr Ed?
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