The Morningstarr*

Alpha · 08-05-2009, 20:35

I felt like sharing a few excerpts. See what you's think. Probably needs cleaning up.

''Where the fuck is he?'' Delta heard Enzo hiss. She had her ear to the door and held onto the handle in case they tried to open it. ''Maybe someone did come along so he hid in there.'' Rocco pointed to the store cuboard. 'Oh shit.' Her heart beating faster Delta held the handle more tightly than ever.

Mr Morningstarr* · 08-05-2009, 20:39

Are you writing a novel?

Alpha · 08-05-2009, 20:52

Yeah, I started in 2004 and finished it. I went back to it last year. I actually rewrote some of it because most of it just seems so unbelievably bad.

A_B · 08-05-2009, 20:55

What's it about, Alpha?

Ck · 08-05-2009, 20:56

I love the 'oh shit' bit

Alpha · 08-05-2009, 20:58

Quote:

Originally Posted by A_B

What's it about, Alpha?

I don't want to go into it much. If i ever manage to fully type it up i'm probably gonna put it on a blog as an online book or something.
But i'll give you a small description of the character.

As you can see her name is Delta, she's 17 and skilled in karate. Her her is ginger and the colour of her eyes are dark green. Her mother is British with brown eyes and her father is American with blue eyes. All i can say is she gets into some serious trouble.

Mr Morningstarr* · 08-05-2009, 21:00

Cool. Well let us know when you do.

Alpha · 08-05-2009, 21:04

I just did an edit on my last post.

timey · 09-05-2009, 05:01

You could publish it and become a famous author.

Alpha · 09-05-2009, 09:12

I know!